I'm always trying to improve my writing in anything that I do.
Recently, I came up with a new logline for Hotel California(A Mystery Adventure Thriller).
Here it is:
For many years, Native-Americans have disappeared near a top secret paranormal research base in Arizona. A young Indian woman(Clarissa)is determined to find out why.
If a journey gets off to a good start, a real meaningful, exciting adventure can happen.
Your journey can be Clarissa's journey.