Kevin Eaton, Dir. of Development, IPC Films
"The story was well written."
Stacy Darline, Writer and Script Consultant
"There are quite a few sequences that contain remarkable amounts
of dream-like, (and nightmarish), events which give your script something that many screenplays don't have- a vivid imagination."
"David, as I turned the final page in your script, I can truthfully
say it was an entertaining read. I was as if I had eaten an entire chocolate cream pie by myself."
Chad Marting, Story Editor, Roaside Attractions
"It is a great concept with interesting characters."
Jacqueline Radley, Story Editor, First Entertainment
"It was written well and I would suggest the script as a possibility
Kaye Bewley, Script Consultant
"Your ideas and use of words are wonderfully put together. What
you have written is vividly colorful."
Mark Kochman, Dentist
"I found the script suspenseful in places and funny in places. The
ending was a complete surprise and threw me for a loop."
Karen Chow, Postal Worker
"The script was very suspenseful and humorous. It was also well
plotted with a great climax."
Kelly Vitullo, Student
"The idea behind the plot is quite good. The native aspect of the
script gave it a good richness---the kind that Oliver Stone often directs. It was a pleasure to read."
Dave Raitt, Screenwriter
"I'd like to thank you for letting me work on the script. It was
an interesting experience to see how another writer works. I found the story extremely interesting and I am sure that others
in more lofty positions will as well. Best of luck to you in your endeavors."